6.1 Flabby ExpressionsYour Task: Review the following sentences to eliminate flabby expressions. We are sending a revised proposal at this point in time due to the fact that building costs have jumped at a considerable rate. In the normal course of events, we would seek additional funding; however, in view of the fact that rates have increased, we cannot. In very few cases has it been advisable for us to borrow money for a period of 90 or fewer days. Inasmuch as our Web advertising income is increasing in a gradual manner, we might seek a loan in the amount of $50,000. Despite the fact that we have had no response to our bid, we are still available in the event you wish to proceed with your building project.6.2 Long Lead-InsYour Task: Revise the following to eliminate long lead-ins. This is an announcement to tell you that all computer passwords must be changed every six months for security purposes. We are sending this memo to notify everyone that anyone who wants to apply for telecommuting may submit an application immediately. I am writing this letter to inform you that your new account executive is Edward Ho.6.3 There is/are and it/was FillersYour Task: Revise the following to avoid unnecessary there is/are and it is/was fillers. There is a password checker that is now available that can automatically evaluate the strength of your password. It is careless or uninformed individuals who are the most vulnerable to computer hackers. There are computers in Internet cafes, at conferences, and in airport lounges that should be considered unsafe for any personal use. A computer specialist told us that there are keystroke-logging devices that gather information typed on a computer, including passwords. If there are any questions that you have about computer safety, please call us.6.4 RedundanciesYour Task: Revise the following to avoid redundancies. Because his laptop was small in size, he could carry it everywhere. A basic fundamental of computer safety is to avoid storing your password on a file in your computer because criminals will look there first. The manager repeated again his warning that we must use strong passwords. Although the two files seem exactly identical, we should proofread each and every page. The computer specialist combined together a PowerPoint presentation and a handout.