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topic :can computers replace real teacher?1
Real Teacher’s Class is Forever
Computers cannot replace classroom teachers because teachers who provide personalized
feedback and guidance to students, which computers cannot do. Through computer-based
learning, such as getting information and instructions repeatedly and assessments, may be
achieved successfully; sometimes computer-based learning cannot answer student’s questions
clearly. In other words, if students have a little tricky question that they cannot understand, they
have to search for the information through computers. However, sometimes computers cannot
answer the questions because there is a lot of information which student cannot understand, so
maybe student feel more confused about the questions. What’s more, there are a lot of
that are unfamiliar for students because most of information is written by
experts. In addition, According to Wendy Kopp’s article “computers can’t replace real teachers,”
computer's feedback is a huge lack of student’s learning. This means computer’s feedbacks are
usually not useful. In contrast, if student asked their questions to their real teachers, the teachers
try to explain the questions on student level. In my case, I always ask some questions to my
teachers, not to computers since I always get confused when I took feedback from the Internet.
The reason is that the Internet explained on not student level, but on export level. Thus I cannot
understand them easily. However, when I ask some questions to my teachers, they give feedback